Person You Admire The Most Essay
THE PERSON I ADMIRE
Ever person admires someone. They are the reason we keep going on despite all the challenges and temptations. They help us go on the right way. They stand as our bones that help us stand straight. They will do everything for you.
There are many people who influence my life, but there is that one special person who showed me more than I could see in the world. That special someone is my MOM. She taught me to keep moving even though I'm close to giving up, she believes that there is always something special waiting for me; you just need to have your faith and believe in yourself. There is one time that I wanted something really bad but she said no and told me that "want" is different from "need". She told me that material things are not important we should be contented in what we have and be thankful for it. During my childhood life there are times that I hated her because she often scold me, but then I realized why she does that because it's their way of showing their love and that, it is not us that they get mad at it's what we did wrong.
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This is nicely written.
There is one time that I wanted something really bad but she said no and told me that "want" is different from "need".
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Maybe you should revise the way you begin this essay, FIRST: introduce the idea of your mom being the one you admire, THEN explain all of the qualities that you describe. Be sure to focus on the qualities of your mother that you admire most, include aspects of her personality, her job, her passions and interests, then link your own self to her qualities. You are already doing these things, just trying to emphasize the best way for you to stay on track. Tell it like its a story, make your words flow. I wish you luck :)
Every person admires someone.
She taught me to keep moving even though I'm close to giving up, she believes that there is always something special waiting for me; " You just need to have your faith and believe in yourself."
During my childhood life there are times that I hated her because she would often scold me, but then I realized why she does that. I t's her way of showing her love and that, it is not me that she go t mad at, it's what I did wrong. You could also give an example of how she helped you learn from a mistake and how that ties into why you admire her so much. (am still working on it) Good so far :)
We might have met up with a lot of people throughout our life, yet people leave and life still goes on as what it used to be. The person that I admire the most is none other than my mother. I admire her the most as she possesses most of the qualities that we should have in order to success in our life.
I think one of the most endearing qualities she possesses is genuineness. When you meet a genuine person, they tend to look you directly in the eye and many times they touch you in order to connect. That’s how she communicates with others. She doesn’t have the average walls up that many people have in life. She seems to touch everyone in a way where one can immediately connect with her and for sure she has no false pretenses. She crosses all barriers and has the ability to connect with others and radiates great empathy to others. It’s almost like she has an additional sense. She never pretended to be perfect or know all the answers but one thing is for sure anything she tells you is coming straight from the heart.
She has been very patient with me and supports me in everything I do. She has done a lot to boost my self-confidence and self-esteem. She does not scold whenever I fail in something, instead she will console me and make me feel better by telling me stories about her own failures and achievements throughout life. She also makes all kinds of sacrifices, big and small for the sake of her children. She has always been my source of inspiration and pillar of strength.
My mom is the one that is always there, the person I can count on, the one that will never turn her back on me. The one that supports, helps, hug, kisses, gives me confidence, comforts, listens, makes me laugh, cheers me up and wipes my tears. She will definitely be the one that I always admire and love the most.